edgarblythe wrote:There are legitemate poems that use near rhymes, aren't there?
Modern lyrics definitely use false rhymes, and so far the new avenues opened by them have been refreshing to the ear, IMO. There are exceptions of course; Country has been quick to find new ways to write about Jesus (Tim McGraw:
"...where the road will lead us, to drugs or Jesus..."). Pulleasus!
But your question reminds me of Jimmy Webb, who in about an hour and a half wrote "Wichita Lineman" while Glen Campbell was visiting the record company Webb was staff writing for. He told Campbell he would fix this rhyme scheme later to make it a true rhyme:
"And I need you more than want you, and I want you for all time.
And the Wichita lineman is still on the line."
Campbell said he liked it, and the rest is history. No matter where Webb goes, he meets people who tell him how much those two lines have touched them. Matched with the plaintive melody behind it, I fully agree.