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Plz rephrase this

 
 
bubu
 
Reply Mon 11 Apr, 2005 06:05 pm
Hallo
I have tried to rephrase a paragraph below. How else can I do it?

"The coach never changed the fresher's natural style. But he only finetuned it.He helped him to develop the right kind of temperament for the game."

1 The coach never interfered with the original[or individual,own] way the beginner played the game.He only streamlined his technique....[I can't do the last line because I don't know how to.]


thank you.
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boomerang
 
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Reply Mon 11 Apr, 2005 07:06 pm
Without trying to change the fresher's style, the coach helped him fine-tune his game by working with him on his temperament.
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