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Exam ..Essay .please help me find out the Grammer mistake .

 
 
Reply Wed 6 Apr, 2005 04:37 am
It's the duty of grown children In Tamil Society to take care for their elderly parents.


Whenever we hear people talking about Tamil Society, the first impression is that men goes deeper in to the culture and find out how many responsibilities grown children are devoting to their elderly parents. Many grown children in Tamil societies are showing their elderly parent's their priority giving of care .It is not the job of the government to take care of their elderly parents, but it is young adult's job. We should all strives to please our parents with our wisdom and appreciation .Taking care is not addressed to five to ten years-old, but to anyone from young adult who have living parents. The love, understanding and conflicts are three examples that each individual feel satisfied about each one's own.

The main role of grown children in Tamil Society show us that the grown children have a better understanding of giving care for their parents .For example children in Tamil society are following up the rules of giving care for their elderly and are physically effected by loving their parents. This is how children are grown up with the Tamil society. It wasn't too many years ago that someone in Tamil society asked whose responsibilities it was to take of the elderly .In the past the parent's of the young adult has taken care of their parents, thus grown children must take advantages to respect their parents according to their duties. Most parents' threat children with the love and respect they deserve, but sometimes it's such a shame when their parents get old and in the way they tried to spent more time with them. A parent would feel bad if their children don't look after them when ever they get old, if a child doesn't take care of their parents, the parents would feel bad because of the fact that they cared for the child. Hopefully many young children have a better understanding of caring for their parents when they get old. Nowadays many young adults are still looking and willing to look after their parents whenever they become old and without putting them outside. In addition parents, who are older, are still a great value of today's living.

Another way of caring for an elderly parent and the only way to improve the care between child- parent relationships is the method of better understanding. Understanding and giving are natural aspects of a human being. The children in Tamil society have a great understanding of their parent's words. For example they know that their mom and dad spent their lifetime with their kids and worked overtime in order to get a head in the future. Understanding builds a Healthy Relationships between Adult Children and Parents. They make the decision to build and maintain a great relationship between the generations in Tamil society's family

Some children don't have any parent-child relationships. These things accidentally happen in wealthier families in Tamil society. The reason to cause problem are, because some children don't care about their parents, they don't obeying or rather getting involved in conflicts with the parent's. Mostly guys tend to get more involved in caring for their aged parent's then girls do. Others spend less time with the elderly, because they don't have much time to look after or they feel stressed whenever their parents get chronically ill. They never think back on the time they borrowed the car, drove it further than they were supposed to resulting in a burned up engine, and a new car loan. Every concerns can be resolved if they communicate with their parents.

Children were raised in different ways and there are differences in how they were valued in Tamil cultures. The parent's tried to get their children to walk and talk and it's not fair when children tried to get them to sit down and shut up. Many children in Tamil culture are giving care to the elderly and therefore parents have a pride about having such great children. Problems can be resolved if we communicate with our parents. And understand builds strength and healthy relationship between adult children and parents. It's their duties to maintain care for the aged parent's because Tamil culture value the tradition, understanding and conflicts. Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes
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hingehead
 
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Reply Wed 6 Apr, 2005 07:50 am
Grammer is spelt 'Grammar'...


Welcome to A2K
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boomerang
 
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Reply Wed 6 Apr, 2005 08:17 am
Many grown children in Tamil societies are showing their elderly parent's their priority giving of care .It is not the job of the government to take care of their elderly parents, but it is young adult's job.

Should be: parents

Most parents’ threat children with the love and respect they deserve, but sometimes it’s such a shame when their parents get old and in the way they tried to spent more time with them.

Should be: spend

A parent would feel bad if their children don’t look after them when ever they get old, if a child doesn't take care of their parents, the parents would feel bad because of the fact that they cared for the child.

Should be: whenever
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flyboy804
 
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Reply Wed 6 Apr, 2005 01:39 pm
Phrase in opening sentence should be "to care for" or "to take care of" not "to take care for".
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realjohnboy
 
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Reply Wed 6 Apr, 2005 02:17 pm
I think I saw six errors in the second paragraph. But we shouldn't be doing your homework for you. Do you agree?
Welcome to A2K.
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AjiniANL
 
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Reply Wed 6 Apr, 2005 03:23 pm
Hey peeps...thank you for ur comments Smile
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AjiniANL
 
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Reply Wed 6 Apr, 2005 03:24 pm
And its a pleasure to meet you guys.....
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turtlette
 
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Reply Tue 19 Apr, 2005 05:57 pm
realjohnboy wrote:
But we shouldn't be doing your homework for you. Do you agree?

It looks like she did her homework to the best of her ability, and is now asking for a little help. Shouldn't it be given to her with out question?

Do you agree?
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AjiniANL
 
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Reply Tue 19 Apr, 2005 07:59 pm
Quote:
It looks like she did her homework to the best of her ability, and is now asking for a little help. Shouldn't it be given to her with out question?

Do you agree?


You gotte it dude!!!!!!!!! Rolling Eyes
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Lash
 
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Reply Fri 22 Apr, 2005 06:20 pm
Ajini--

Hi. Welcome.

I have a grammar problem, too, and I didn't want to start a new thread. Hope you don't mind me borrowing your thread.

In that void, several unflattering hypotheses have sprung (?) into print regarding the true personality, motives, and substance of Jules Cardinal Mazarin.

have sprung? Sounds wrong. But the alternatives sound wronger.


<Nobody tell me about wronger.>

Thanks!
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Lash
 
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Reply Fri 22 Apr, 2005 07:25 pm
He points out the last biography of

Mazarin was published in 1903.

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points out? Can you say that? Sounds wrong. Is it correct, incorrect, just awkward? Is there a better way? Don't want to say..."he says"

I'm polishing three term papers this weekend, and I can no longer write a simple sentence.

<growl>
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Lash
 
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Reply Fri 22 Apr, 2005 07:50 pm
Cross-referring commentaries of other historians, the preponderant opinion deems Mazarin greedy, willing to prolong war to enrich his King and himself, and having gained his greatest source
of power in the bed of Anne of Austria, mother and Regent of King Louis XIV.
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and having gained?

and of gaining?

and of having gained?

and as having gained....?

not sure one can be "deemed of gaining"...

and I am unsure if the first phrase fits in with the rest of the sentence.

I used to like writing....
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AjiniANL
 
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Reply Sat 23 Apr, 2005 05:06 am
Hey..Lash
sorry about that...i am just guessing tooo but not sure
which one is correct........

I have a friend walking around at this Forum
she is retired teacher.....Her name is Letty
why don't you take a peak at her:)

thank u
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