May you correct these words for me please!

Hello Maxbright, and welcome to A2K....

Here are my suggestions about your writing.

Now I am going to tell you something that happened to me today. Okay, let me tell you about the formidable process of getting my beatiful blog started. I had been searching Google to find the websites that provide blog service for almost all the afternoon today but I haven't found any website that satisfied by me. As I felt so disappointed and started got to give it up the oioj.net came into my sight. What a nice blog website! I really love it! It not only has the most useful functions for of blogging but also has a nice look that fits my taste exactly. Then I applied for one immediately and that is all. How happy I am at this moment! And that tells me that all the nice things anywhere in all over the world are not easy to get.

Add the things in red. Take out the things in green. Space after punctuation.

English can be written in many ways. Others might disagree with what I think, but these changes help to clarify and improve your English, in my opinion.

Thank you very much for your corrections.

I'll try my best to study English.

Would you like to have a look at my blog?
Edit [Moderator]: Link removed

Any kind of comments on my blog are welcome!

Hi Wy, I'd certainly go with you ( even if I don't know much myself ). But, isn't that beautiful what you meant ?

Thanks