High School Personal Narrative!

Cool story, dude. No great problem with it just the way it is written. But since you asked:
I have no idea who Anna Wintour is. I reckon I would put a colon after her name.
The sentence that goes like "Although she is usually right...you do not challenge..." If she is right, why would you challenge? I got a mite confused with that sentence.
Get rid of "wierdest." I'm not sure its a word and it sounds juvenile to me in an otherwise adult spoken story.
"...blood would boil...and flesh would crawl..." is trite, in my mind.
Again, a great story, but that's as far I got into it with any notes.
Is this high school? College? -rjb-