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Please choose the better one

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oristarA
 
Reply Tue 21 Dec, 2004 09:36 pm
Which one is best?

1) The rain had washed away the noise and fickleness of the city, along with the dust blowing around like frivolous fickleness

2) The rain had washed away the noise and fickleness of the city, along with the dust blowing around like shattered cobwebs.
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Synonymph
 
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Reply Tue 21 Dec, 2004 10:01 pm
Dust like shattered cobwebs is much better imagery.
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needanswers
 
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Reply Wed 22 Dec, 2004 05:29 am
Re: Please choose the best one
oristarA wrote:

2) The rain had washed away the noise and fickleness of the city, along with the dust blowing around like shattered cobwebs.


Number 2 is the best
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oristarA
 
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Reply Wed 22 Dec, 2004 05:56 am
Cool!

Thank you both.
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