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Reply Fri 10 Dec, 2004 06:16 am
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Pudong International Airport is located in northeast of our area.

The airport covers 40 sq.km., begining to operate since Oct, 1999.

By the year 2005, it will be primarily confirmed as the key airport in Asia-Pacific Area.

By the year 2010, it will be the largest key international airport with largest throughput of passengers, goods, and highest transfer percentage.
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Joe Nation
 
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Reply Fri 10 Dec, 2004 06:50 am
Pudong International Airport is located northeast of our area.

The facility covers 40 square kilometers and began operations in October 1999.

By the year 2005, it will be the key airport for the Asia-Pacific area.

By the year 2010, it will be the busiest international airport with the largest throughput of passengers and goods, and the highest transfer percentage rate in the world.


A couple of notes: Don't abbreviate dates. Oct. should be October. Square kilometers are square kilometers unless you painting a roadsign Smile

Two: Unless there an official Asia-Pacific Area is should be Asia-Pacific area.

I am not sure what the difference is between throughput and transfer percentage but strings of things need to be similar.

Joe
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oristarA
 
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Reply Sat 11 Dec, 2004 07:29 am
Very cool, Joe!

I especially appreciated the usage of "facility'! That sounds so professional! Very Happy
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