Hi, sorry for the urgency here, but I have a deadline tomorrow for an ad I'm writing. I know the jist of what I want to say, but it doesn't "flow."
Here is the jist of what I need to say (this is for a carpet, rug, upholstery cleaning/washing business--target market is millionaires or those who have a true appreciation for quality):
*Cleaning & Sealing of your fine carpet, rugs, and upholstery.
*Hand washing of Oriental and other fine rugs and tapestries.
*We are skilled in all fabrics and weaves
*We have all cleaning methods available so your goods are treated with what's right, not what's available.
In particular, I need a rewrite of the last line. But if you have other ideas for the rest, I'll listen to those, too.
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FYI, the meaning of the last line is that we have, and are skilled at, all cleaning methods. You will be familiar with at least one of these: Hot Water Extraction, Steam Cleaning, Bonnet, Oscillating Pad, Very Low Moisture, Dry Compound (both absorption and adsorption), Immersion Washing, Dry Solvent.
Problem is, I don't want the ad to be verbose. It's only a 7.5" x 4.75".
Thanks,
GT