For your sweetheart

well 8 would do it for me!

8

Thanks.

Copperfield: Say your heart is only mine.
Dora: Yes, it's only yours!

MY DALVA DE OLIVEIRA


Go,
My Dalva de Oliveira
My orange tree blossom
My ripe fruit
Oh, temptation

Go,
Out in the street half-naked
Scandalizing the shops
Let the people lust after you, desire you
Loose their manners (already scarce)

Get out,
My fire hazard
Don't hide your fire
Let out smoke and make a Carnaval
Soil everything with smog
And think that confusion is not enough

Later,
Come back home with me
I'll always be your shelter
Playing this role
The wonderful role of husband

I am your fan, and I am with you
And my heart is only yours
I am your fan, and I am with you
And my heart is only yours

did you write this? excellent!



couple of comments: - second verse lose not loose


soil is a negative word - dirty, foul, nasty - some other word would be better


let out smoke doesn't quite work - catch fire? catch light? ....

Thanks Vivien.


I wish I wrote the lyric. But no, the lyric was not written by me.
I posted the lyric just because "my line" is the line of the lyric. That is, "my heart is only yours"! What a coincidence! (I googled the lyric out after I wrote 'my line". It is very interesting there was someone in the world who ever thought as the same as what I thought!)