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Thu 9 Sep, 2004 10:29 pm
Which one is the best?
(1) charming nocturne
(2) attractive nocturne
(3) beautiful night
(4) intoxicating vista of night
(5) Tender is the Night
(6)enchanted night
Best for what, Oristar? Are you versifying again? Tender is the Night is a good Fitzgerald novel. Otherwise, I like 'beautiful night'-- simple and straightforward.
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