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Are the following sentences correct?

 
 
Reply Sun 10 Jul, 2016 01:20 am
Please tell me if the following sentences are correct. Thank you.

We have no comment on your proposed excavation work at the Trinity Road at this early stage. However, as part of the alignment of your excavation work seemingly affect the trees and plants under the Greening Community Scheme at the above road, we may wish to solicit a comment on your work from some parties managing the scheme, like the Environmental Department.
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mark noble
 
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Reply Mon 11 Jul, 2016 09:38 am
@chowbarry,
Fine by me
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ehBeth
 
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Reply Mon 11 Jul, 2016 09:51 am
@chowbarry,
Several posters have told you that you are too wordy.

You don't seem to have listened to them.

Please try editing this example yourself so it is shorter and clearer.
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izzythepush
 
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Reply Wed 10 Aug, 2016 05:13 am
Agree with Beth, too wordy. If you want to keep it though, affects not affect.

Ignore Select My Tutor, non native speaker possibly a bot.
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