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Reply Tue 28 Jun, 2016 12:51 pm
Hi all, english is not my tongue language and I am working on a new viral content project, where a I need a slogan.
Does it sound correct to say: " Adding motion to your daily boredom"
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Tes yeux noirs
 
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Reply Tue 28 Jun, 2016 01:14 pm
It sounds like you are offering people boredom with motion, which is not very attractive.
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roger
 
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Reply Tue 28 Jun, 2016 01:19 pm
@happster,
It's a catchy phrase. In the right context, it could be very good, keeping in mind that boredom doesn't sell well.
cicerone imposter
 
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Reply Tue 28 Jun, 2016 01:22 pm
@happster,
Isn't motion part of that boredom?
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happster
 
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Reply Tue 28 Jun, 2016 01:23 pm
@roger,
It will be a website featuring "buzzfeed" style stories about skateboards and other driving gadgets. In other words - entertainment site featuring action videos.
Thank you for your feedback!
cicerone imposter
 
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Reply Tue 28 Jun, 2016 01:24 pm
@happster,
Some interesting stuff on boredom.
http://www.scientificamerican.com/article/now-computers-can-tell-when-you-re-bored/
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roger
 
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Reply Tue 28 Jun, 2016 01:35 pm
@happster,
In that case, I think I would shy away from words like boredom.
chai2
 
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Reply Tue 28 Jun, 2016 02:04 pm
@roger,
I agree.

I don't want someone to tell me that I'm bored, or that my daily life is a bore.

Also, the word motion? Not feeling that either. You must me adding excitment, interest, a bit of fun etc.
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Reply Wed 29 Jun, 2016 12:28 am
@happster,
I always enjoy a daily motion or two, sometimes more.

I would especially commend it to skate boarders before attempting any top of the pipe routines.

I'd eschew motions and any hint of boredom: it's ennui go.

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