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Thu 2 Jun, 2016 09:02 am
Actually it's a product description that i was writing. Any native English speaker can help me? Do you think there is anything wrong with this or you can make it sound better? Thanks so much!
"Exfoliation - Pores astringent - Prevention of acne.
Environmental pollution, harmful UV rays, hormone changing, vitamin deficiency and aging process, etc. These factors will make your skin dry, rough and listless.
Mineral Mud Body Scrub is a smart choice by not only helping you regenerate skin to lighten your skin effectively, but protecting the skin's moisture balance to make your skin naturally smooth."
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@Matt11,
regenerate skin to lighten it effectively, but also protecting its moisture balance to make it naturally smooth
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