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Fri 27 Aug, 2004 02:39 am
(Need editing)
Some stowawaies to return home before mid-autumn festival
Mainland pays attention to 'Typhoon Diplomacy'
Li Denghui wants to have fun Japan hesitates
(Note: Li Denghui is ex-president of Taiwan)
Deng Nan remembers his father Tearful
Chief executive: Deng Xiaoping's achievements spur Hongkong's people
Gao Siren calls for carrying out Deng's ideas
<b>Stowaways to return before autumn festival</b>
<b>Mainland notes 'Typhoon Diplomacy'</b>
<b>Li Denghui wants fun</b> Japan hesitates
<b>Deng Nan remembers his father</b>
<b>Chief executive</b>: Deng Xiaoping spurs Hong Kong
<b>Gao Siren: realize Deng's ideas</b>
Keep them brief. Remember that the reader will get the details within the article itself.
Is it you, Mr.Micawber? I'm very glad to see you at A2K!
Excellent editing.
I highly appreciated the rewriting 'Chief executive: Deng Xiaoping spurs Hong Kong ".
Only a small question remains:
Note = To observe carefully; notice?
Hi Orestar (What's that mean?),
Good to see you here. Yes, I think 'notes' is fine for a headline for 'notices, pays attention to'. Its main advantage is that it is short.
I apologize for misspelling you, OriStar. Is the 'A' your last initial, or are there other Oristars around (OristarB, OristarC, etc.)?
In some virtual regions, I am MisterMicawber, MrMicawber, or Mister_Micawber, because of the imposters already using my moniker when I got there!
OriStarA meant that I wanted to know what is the origin of a top star (StarA = top star in my book). So it is unlikely that I would like to have a moniker like OristarB etc.