Re: Together promoting team-spirit
oristarA wrote:Please make the paragraph below sound professional in English.
What he says and does has an immediate clout upon his colleagues in the company. He treats his employees as the members of his family, thinking what they think, and doing what they do. Only can a good leader bring out good employees. An ordinary word that he delivers is the answer that all of us have been looking for -- Together promoting team-spirit, our company shall boom as a matter of course.
Here are a couple of different versions - I was unsure about what you were trying to say with the sentence about treating employees as members of his family and whether you meant, in the last sentence, that the team spirit combined with a good leader would lead to success. Hope this helps.
His words and actions give him clout with colleagues inside the company. He treats his employees as family members, thinking as they think and doing what they do. Only a good leader can bring out the potential of his employees. His casual comments offer the solutions we need. - Together, promoting team-spirit, our company shall succeed as a matter of course.
His words and actions give him clout inside the company. Only a good leader can bring out the potential of his employees... he treats his employees as he would his family, thinking and working with them. His casual comments lead to the solutions we need. A good leader promotes a strong team and creates unbeatable team spirit, leading our company to success.