Here is a message for ad, improve its grammar please

Re: Here is a message for ad, improve its grammar please


I have separated the two sections (see below). I don't know the target audience(s), but it sounds like there are two. Feel free to combine. I am sure others will have other suggestions.

"The patterns are exquisitely and elegantly embroidered. The pillows and cushions are fully filled with no hollow corners. Our after-service and reputation are unrivalled at home and abroad."

"Our mottos for for management and development are "Quality wins the market" and "We give our all to our customers."

Re: Here is a message for ad, improve its grammar please
Hi oristarA.

I just want to give you a quick primer on adverb word order in English. I won't cover all the bases but will touch on some rules for the sentence you posted.



Generally:

The adverb goes after a to be verb and before other verbs.

He lovingly caressed the goat.

He is frequently late.

So as bermbits noted, it should be:

exquisitely and elegantly (adverbs) embroidered (verb)

My grammar book told that an adverb can be put in anywhere in a sentence...

I checked out some articles from AP or WashingtonPost, yes you are right Craven.

Thank you both.

Generally (adverb) it can't, unless you are deftly (adverb) trying (verb) to achieve a certain effect.

For example, the above sentence is structured in a way to emphasize the initial adverb.

Nice, Craven. I think that is what the book wanted to express. I just didn't know the "normal place" without that "unless".

Been talking to Gus again Craven? Keeping my eye on you, cyber-boy....

Which is correct?

What makes you perfect is your imperfections.

OR

What makes you perfect are you imperfections.

Of course only the first sentence is correct.

I would say the second because "your imperfections" is the subject. I see the verb "is" as an equal sign here.

I would change:

With perfect after service, we have won over the hearts of our customers and enjoy high reputation home and abroad.
to:
With our superior service, we have won over the hearts of our customers and enjoy a great reputation at home and abroad.