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Punctuation for complex sentence.

 
 
epinkel
 
Reply Mon 25 Jan, 2016 01:22 pm
They had long ago traveled past the farthest edge of the great Ming Empire and were now deep in Choros Oirat Mongol territory 30 days hard ride from the furthest western Chinese outposts.

Is there any punctuation needed after territory? What is the rule in this case?
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Region Philbis
 
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Reply Mon 25 Jan, 2016 01:34 pm
@epinkel,

not sure what the rule is, but i would definitely put a comma after territory...
dalehileman
 
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Reply Mon 25 Jan, 2016 02:45 pm
@Region Philbis,
I think the rule, Reg, is, to use it wherever it seems to improve the sentence
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neologist
 
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Reply Mon 25 Jan, 2016 03:14 pm
@epinkel,
I'd agree with Region, here.
"30 days hard ride from the furthest western Chinese outposts." is an explanatory clause.

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epinkel
 
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Reply Mon 25 Jan, 2016 04:08 pm
@Region Philbis,
Thank you.
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