@fresco,
Thank you for your input. I've been writing on and off for a little over a year now and I always have concerns about my punctuation. Never decided on joining a forum to improve my grammar. You'll be seeing me here often lol.
One more example:
"So I turn around
and as I look to my left,
there is a woman
in a coat.
She scared the hell out of me!"
Is it okay to add the comma before 'there'?
Ps: I've done some research and it seems like thats how it should be, before 'there'. No period. But I could be wrong.