@Tes yeux noirs,
lovecraft talks like all those clam dippers. Even when he does his "mythos" he sounds like hes trying to impress.
I have a Bulwer Lytton book of shorties and they are a hoot to read. He was impressed with himself, and many wonder why.
My Pa Dutch heritage has gifted me with a side that is taciturn , but my Russian side is full of stories of death and hunger. So whenever I write, I try to keep it short but sad.
Its a curse. I have a ton of punch lines but no set-ups