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Which sentence is more correct?

 
 
xbocker
 
Reply Mon 14 Sep, 2015 11:56 pm
"I was at home studying for my exam when I received the unfortunate news that my mother had passed away"

"I was at home studying for my exam when I received the unfortunate news that my mother passed away"
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bobsal u1553115
 
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Reply Wed 16 Sep, 2015 06:55 pm
@xbocker,
Shouldn't that be which sentence is correcter?
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McTag
 
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Reply Thu 17 Sep, 2015 01:12 am
@xbocker,
Had is required.

But also note, news is not unfortunate. It's just news.
Setanta
 
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Reply Thu 17 Sep, 2015 01:46 am
I believe the correct technical term is more betterer.
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bloomsbury-me
 
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Reply Fri 18 Sep, 2015 04:23 am
@xbocker,
I would say "passed away" is sufficient to describe what happend. Had is the past tense of the verb have - which implies possesion of something. Hope that helps Very Happy
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Glennn
 
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Reply Fri 18 Sep, 2015 10:23 am
@xbocker,
How about this: I was not at anyone else's house studying for no one's exam but my own when I received the not so great news that, when it came to living, it could now be said that my mom used to did.

No charge!
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InfraBlue
 
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Reply Fri 18 Sep, 2015 12:14 pm
@McTag,
"Unfortunate" here is being used to mean "bad." Surely there is bad news as well as good news.
McTag
 
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Reply Fri 18 Sep, 2015 03:25 pm
@InfraBlue,

But unfortunate doesn't mean bad.
So news can not be unfortunate, just as age can not be young.
InfraBlue
 
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Reply Fri 18 Sep, 2015 10:23 pm
@McTag,
Well, "deplorable" is used to define "unfortunate," and "bad" is used to define "deplorable" as per the American Heritage Dictionary.
McTag
 
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Reply Sat 19 Sep, 2015 01:49 am
@InfraBlue,

I think these are particularly bad definitions, and therefore deplorable.
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