kuben123
 
Reply Sun 31 May, 2015 05:20 am
We fear failure so much that we fail to see beyond it; within every failure is a story of success waiting to happen!

Analyse your failure and find ways to overcome them; find new ways to address old unresolved issues.

Spot any grammar or punctuation errors?
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Tes yeux noirs
 
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Reply Sun 31 May, 2015 05:55 am
I would prefer a period to an an exclamation mark to end the first sentence.
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izzythepush
 
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Reply Sun 31 May, 2015 08:04 am
@kuben123,
kuben123 wrote:

Analyse your failure and find ways to overcome them;

Either
Analyse your failure and find ways to overcome it
or
Analyse your failures and find ways to overcome them,
or
Analyse your failings and find ways to overcome them
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