Quick Translation Help! "In the Aeroplane Over the Sea"

Hello everyone, I am a high school Latin III student who needs some help with a translation! This is more than just a sentence or two, it is actually a song. This is a project I am working on for school. My final draft is due tomorrow (This is last minute, I know). If anyone would be serious about looking over my translation (English to Latin) and helping me spot any errors I would really appreciate it. I am new to this site, so I'm not too sure how it works but if you would be interested in helping me, comment or send me a message, please Then, I could send you a copy of my translation to help proof read. The song is "In the Aeroplane Over the Sea" by The Neutral Milk Hotel. I am in a bit of a time crunch, so the sooner the better!

Thanks to anyone who would be willing to help!