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Thu 10 Jun, 2004 08:25 pm
(1) The importance of the location also determines that it would be invaded periodically.
(2) Its pivotal location has also exposed it to periodic invasions.
Its pivotal location has also exposed it to periodic invasions.
You can remove the 'has' .
Its pivotal location also exposed it to periodic invasions.
Joe
I agree. I read the first one a few times and it still didn't seem to make sense.
Is "it" something that existed - or was open to invasion - in the past? If there is still a threat to "it" then 'exposeS' is what you need. If referring to something from the past then Joe Nation's suggestion is definitely the correct wording.
I'm familiar with the Huns and Visigoths, but who the hell were the Periodics?
Re: Which one is better?
oristarA wrote:(1) The importance of the location also determines that it would be invaded periodically.
(2) Its pivotal location has also exposed it to periodic invasions.
The location may determine it's invasion potential.
"The importance of the location dictated that it would be invaded frequently." That's my choice.
"Pivotal" denotes something else for me. If you want to use that locution, then I'd say, "The central location exposed it..."
... just my opinion. Hi, OristarA!
gustavratzenhofer wrote:I'm familiar with the Huns and Visigoths, but who the hell were the Periodics?
They were those Table of Elements guys, led by Dmitri Mendeleev.
Hehe, I might be partial. I especially appreciate Wy's opinion here. But Joe's idea is also excellent.