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Reply Wed 9 Jun, 2004 06:48 am
Wise people could take the advantage both by adhering to adequate beliefs and by compromising undue ones, while fools often fall into trouble because of either untimely persistence or inappropriate compromise.
or we can say: take the advantage both of adhering....and of compromising...., which expression is better.
thanks
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Reply Wed 9 Jun, 2004 09:59 am
ignoring the actual 'meaning of the text which is confusing at best, first leave out the 'the' before 'advantage', and either will do, but the comparison is somewhat mute since in both cases the style is poor, and it is 'wordy'.

i suggest:
"Wise people will find advantage in adhering to adequate beliefs and by compromising undue ones, while fools often fall into trouble from untimely persistence or inappropriate compromise."
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Neoquixote
 
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Reply Wed 9 Jun, 2004 05:51 pm
you are right, Bogowo, i am trying to make my writing more terse and incisive. thank you.
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