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ZR Syndicate

 
 
Reply Fri 4 Jun, 2004 12:12 am
ZR Syndicate emerges from
Hangzhou City private-run enterprises

the biggest one of its kind in which enterprises cooperate
one another

Have the headline and subtitle been expressed proplerly?
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Eos
 
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Reply Fri 4 Jun, 2004 09:04 pm
ZR Syndicate emerges from Hangzhou City private enterprises
biggest cooperative syndicate to date

also, it's 'cooperate with one another'.
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oristarA
 
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Reply Fri 4 Jun, 2004 09:18 pm
I like the rewriting "biggest cooperative syndicate to date ". It sounds very terse!
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Eos
 
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Reply Fri 4 Jun, 2004 10:20 pm
That's right. Call me 'Scourge of the Prolix, Avenger of the Overstimulated Sentence". Or tell me to shut up. Whatever. :wink:
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oristarA
 
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Reply Sat 5 Jun, 2004 01:03 am
I like "Scourge of the Prolix". But if I called you that, I might be suspected as masochism. So I... decide to tell you "Shut up". But how can I demand a good rhetor to shut up? You've trapped me in a dilemma. Razz
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