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Grammar question

 
 
david57
 
Reply Mon 3 Nov, 2014 03:27 pm
Hello, everyone!
Need help with e-commerce store description. Shop description below is correct?

"Looking for place to buy board games cheaper? Look no further. Example.com is board games shop. All board game deals in one place."

How this description sounds for native english speaker? I would appreciate your advice and thoughts on how to improve description. Please keep in mind it's a seo description ( 160 characters maximum and i must use keywords "buy, board, games, cheaper or cheap"
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