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Mon 27 Oct, 2014 05:22 am
Can you correct my grammar and style and word choice?
-Life is full of pain(s) and misery(-ies). Sometimes you do not want to offend other people, and you just want to be a hermit, secluding yourself in a small corner, and paying no regard to the storm outside the tranquil life you are living/leading. However, some people are aggressive and extorting, which nature in their character(s) drive them to deprive/exploit others of their in-born rights and freedoms. They then become vengeful. Giving up revenge would occasion indignance; harbouring retaliation intentions would vitiate/weaken/shrink/impoverish attention that could be employed to seek happiness. This dilemma brings human beings agony(-ies) and anguish(es).
I have little interest in editing your writing for you. However, in your first sentence, you should use pain and misery, not the plurals.
Thank you.
But can anyone help me correct my English?