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Could check my grammar mistakes please?

 
 
Reply Mon 27 Oct, 2014 03:07 am
About Lysva
Lysva - one of the largest industrial cities of Perm Krai. The birth and development of the city is connected with the construction of iron-smelting Lysvenskiy and ironworks in 1785. Raised from the mining village, is one of the historical cities of the Kama region.


In our city there are plenty of attractions that have historical and cultural value. Our city - a good place for tourism


We would like to offer the tourist route in our city.
Tourist route:
- House of Count Shuvalov
- Lysvensky Museum
- The Church of St. John the Divine
- Memorial of Glory. Avenue of Heroes
- Drama Theatre named after Anatoly Savin
- Park named after A.S. Pushkin
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Reply Mon 27 Oct, 2014 03:10 am
Theres sure one in the title...

in the top 3 sentences, the third looks funny.
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Reply Mon 27 Oct, 2014 03:13 am
Raised from the mining village, Lysva blah blah
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