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Dear Sir/Madam,
Here is the sentence which I wanted to write as a main heading in my STATEMENT OF PURPOSE. Kindly check the sentence and let me know if there are any corrections to be made.

1. 'It is not just a Statement of Purpose...It is a crusade for accomplishing my passion on research.'
2. 'I wouldn't call it just a Statement of Purpose...I name it as a crusade for
accomplishing my passion on research instead.'
3. 'It is not just a Statement of Purpose...After all, it is a crusade for accomplishing my passion on research.'

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@pranavvemula,

pranavvemula wrote:

'It is not just a Statement of Purpose.
It is a crusade for accomplishing my passion for research.'

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@pranavvemula,

I would replace "accomplishing" with "expressing". IMO you don't accomplish passion.

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@pranavvemula,

One doesn't 'accomplish' a passion.

It is not just a Statement of Purpose - it is a crusade to realise my passion for research.'

('realise' with the same meaning as in;
She realised her ambition of winning an Olympic gold medal.

I like engineer's "expressing" also - if not more than 'realise'!)

Kindly check the sentence

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