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Tue 30 Sep, 2014 11:12 am
These people is called "rioting people" , which is harmful to the social system by the local media .
Here .i aim to mean that the socalled "rioting people" is the harmful people for the society , but . i add " by the local media " at the end , then i begin concerning about the misunderstanding will occur that the local media will be the " harmful people" , is my concern necessary?
@Arafat ,
The sentence is badly written.
These people are called "rioters," and are deemed harmful to society by the local media.
Gee, I read his sentence as meaning:
The media is calling these people "rioters" and deem they are harmful to society.
@InfraBlue,
Ha thx for ur correction ... i found that urs is much more idomatic .
@Arafat ,
Arafat wrote:
Ha thx for ur correction ... i found that urs is much more idomatic .
So, is it the media that is calling these people rioters, or are they being called rioters by some unnamed others?
@Arafat ,
Oh, Punkey's rewrite is better, then.
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