@WBYeats,
There are many variations as to how this could be written. This is my version:
I am writing to seek permission for extended residence at the college during the D2 period. As you are aware, the D1 period does not extend to the start of the new term, so that I will have to check out. Law students who have applied for D2 do not; and hence, my request for special permission to apply for D2. (((or are you asking specifically for "residency" - I don't know what D2 entails.)))
My difficulty is that my house is now being invaded by insects, owing to the construction work nearby, and is constantly beset by mosquitos. Even a brief visit back there occasions extensive wheals on my body.
I do sincerely hope you can extend the requested permission, and trust I will hear from you soon.
(Note the spelling of 'wheal' )
Oh, and I think it only fair to you and other forum members who might peruse this, and any other contribution I make to this forum, that Setanta considers:
"Bazza's English is piss-poor. I advise you to ignore anything Bazza says on the subject….If you (Bazza6) claim to be a native speaker of English, then i (sic) would not only say that your English is piss-poor, i'd (sic) say you were lying."