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Mon 25 Aug, 2014 12:44 pm
Is this sentence correct?
She bought some eggs from the grocery store, and we made sandwiches with them when she returned, but there wasn't enough for everyone, so she went back to the store and purchased more.
@GrammarianasaurusRex,
Yes Rex. However it's a little jerky so I'd try removing a couple of the commas or divide it into two separate sentences or maybe even three
@GrammarianasaurusRex,
She bought some eggs from the grocery store and we made sandwiches with them. When she returned there wasn't enough for everyone so she went back to the store and purchased more.
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