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Thu 10 Apr, 2014 04:16 pm
Yeah right, Anne thought as she pretended to fall asleep, while her husband, Ed, continued to complete the survey.
@vande,
Van I would have omitted the last three commas
I'm not sure you need "to complete" either
@Ragman,
Quote:"Yeah, right", Anne thought...
There's some controversy about locating that first comma. Your placement is maybe technically more logical, but usu it would come before the quote
…though I might eliminate it altogether