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PROOFREAD THIS PLEASE :)

 
 
Reply Wed 12 Mar, 2014 04:57 am
Hi guys! This is an informal essay but please proofread this one for me. Please. Thank you!

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"Yesterday was officially my last day as student. Not really sure if I should be feeling happy or what because I don't want school life to end. This semester was the hardest ever. Think I trailed off, one way or another, from my self - which is not good. I've always been light with the way I handled school but last semester was very different, trying hard to juggle everything - and failing miserably. And my last exam was a ratchet-butt-kicking-self-confidence eye-opener. At least, it was pretty much evocative. I guess there's no other way from here but up. Lessons learned, live one. Fair point well made."
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Reply Tue 22 Apr, 2014 05:55 am
@deadmonitor,
Very well said deadmonitor.
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Reply Fri 17 Apr, 2015 11:25 pm
@deadmonitor,
Hi Deadmonitor,
"Yesterday was officially my last day as student" I think it should be "Officially it was my last day as a student at my school, but I'm little bit confused that I should be happy or not because I don't want to end my school life."
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