Re: that defined Enron to ... presidential sex
oristarA wrote:I feel it is not easy to understand the paragraph below:
Context:
FROM corporate environmental malfeasance, mutual fund fraud and the mega-bilking that defined Enron to Martha Stewart's minor-league insider trading, schoolroom plagiarism and presidential sex, the United States is enjoying one of its recurrent waves of public immorality -- and an equally characteristic obsession with values, family and other, on talk shows and campaign hustings and in pundit publications.
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This whole piece is a literary mess!
It is incorrect grammatically, poorly punctuated, and therefore virtually meaningless!
attempting to rewrite:
"from malfeasance in the corporate environment, mutual fund fraud and the mega-bilking that defined Enron, to minor-league insider trading by Martha Stewart, schoolroom plagiarism and presidential sex, the United States is experiencing one of many recurrent waves of public immorality -- and an equally characteristic obsession with values, family and other matters, on talk shows, campaign hustings, and in pundit publications."
it still suffers badly from poor style!!