1
   

that defined Enron to ... presidential sex

 
 
Reply Sun 25 Apr, 2004 09:23 am
I feel it is not easy to understand the paragraph below:

Context:
FROM corporate environmental malfeasance, mutual fund fraud and the mega-bilking that defined Enron to Martha Stewart's minor-league insider trading, schoolroom plagiarism and presidential sex, the United States is enjoying one of its recurrent waves of public immorality -- and an equally characteristic obsession with values, family and other, on talk shows and campaign hustings and in pundit publications.

--------------------------------------------------------

(1) I guess "corporate environmental malfeasance" means "malfeasance in the environment of corporation". Right?
(2) "that defined Enron to ... presidential sex" got me so confused!
(3) I think "characteristic" means "typical" here, but "equally typical" seems not holding water. Rolling Eyes
(4) ... Razz
  • Topic Stats
  • Top Replies
  • Link to this Topic
Type: Discussion • Score: 1 • Views: 595 • Replies: 7
No top replies

 
oristarA
 
  1  
Reply Sun 25 Apr, 2004 10:40 am
I think "presidential sex" might mean "the love affair that tarnished Clinton's presidency".

"That defined Enron" means that "corporate environmental malfeasance, mutual fund fraud and the mega-bilking" endow Enron with the definition that is as the same as the definition of "presidential sex", or of "schoolroom plagiarism", or of "Martha Stewart's minor-league insider trading".

Right?
0 Replies
 
sozobe
 
  1  
Reply Sun 25 Apr, 2004 10:56 am
"Corporate environmental malfeasance" has to do with things like violations of the Clean Air Act. Corporations are not playing by the rules in a lot of ways, this refers to polluting and violating rules on pollution by doing so, and therefore harming the environment.

"The mega-bilking that defined Enron" -- Enron is a company that did bad things, like bilk people (fool/ steal from them) on a large scale. (The "mega-" prefix means large.)

"Presidential sex" probably refers to Clinton, yes, though that's not exactly contemporaneous with the other issues mentioned.

"Characteristic" is pretty straightforward, typical, as characterized by, that sort of thing. The author is saying that the "public immortality" is characteristic of America, and equally characteristic (equally true of America, just as characteristic of America) is the "obsession with values."

It's a run-on sentence with a lot of allusions to current events in America -- if you're not aware of those events, it's confusing. The use (or lack thereof) of commas is odd. It's understandable, but not great writing.
0 Replies
 
oristarA
 
  1  
Reply Mon 26 Apr, 2004 01:37 am
Hi Sozobe, Thanks for reply.

(1) equally = generally = ubiquitously?
(2) pundit publications = expert publications?
0 Replies
 
sozobe
 
  1  
Reply Mon 26 Apr, 2004 08:24 am
(1) No, equally. Just as. The same. "When the green bucket is filled with 1 gallon of water and the red bucket is filled with water, they are equally full."

(2) The meaning of "pundit" has less to do with actual expertise than expressing informed opinions; less textbook, more Op-Ed page.
0 Replies
 
oristarA
 
  1  
Reply Mon 26 Apr, 2004 08:37 am
Op-Ed = Opinion & Editorial?
0 Replies
 
BoGoWo
 
  1  
Reply Mon 26 Apr, 2004 08:54 am
Re: that defined Enron to ... presidential sex
oristarA wrote:
I feel it is not easy to understand the paragraph below:

Context:
FROM corporate environmental malfeasance, mutual fund fraud and the mega-bilking that defined Enron to Martha Stewart's minor-league insider trading, schoolroom plagiarism and presidential sex, the United States is enjoying one of its recurrent waves of public immorality -- and an equally characteristic obsession with values, family and other, on talk shows and campaign hustings and in pundit publications.

--------------------------------------------------------
Razz


This whole piece is a literary mess!
It is incorrect grammatically, poorly punctuated, and therefore virtually meaningless!

attempting to rewrite:

"from malfeasance in the corporate environment, mutual fund fraud and the mega-bilking that defined Enron, to minor-league insider trading by Martha Stewart, schoolroom plagiarism and presidential sex, the United States is experiencing one of many recurrent waves of public immorality -- and an equally characteristic obsession with values, family and other matters, on talk shows, campaign hustings, and in pundit publications."

it still suffers badly from poor style!!
0 Replies
 
oristarA
 
  1  
Reply Mon 26 Apr, 2004 09:06 am
Ah thanks BoGoWo, and if possible, I'd like to see opinions from Roberta, McTag, Setanta, Piffka etc. Smile
0 Replies
 
 

Related Topics

deal - Question by WBYeats
Let pupils abandon spelling rules, says academic - Discussion by Robert Gentel
Please, I need help. - Question by imsak
Is this sentence grammatically correct? - Question by Sydney-Strock
"come from" - Question by mcook
concentrated - Question by WBYeats
 
  1. Forums
  2. » that defined Enron to ... presidential sex
Copyright © 2024 MadLab, LLC :: Terms of Service :: Privacy Policy :: Page generated in 0.03 seconds on 04/29/2024 at 04:16:31