Someone need to check the correctness

Hi Guys,
As you all know, we're planning (or we've planned, or there's planned) a big friendly match with our veterans' team Sunday . Before selecting our final 11 participants I would like to be sure of your availability all day

Don't bother helping him. He never comes back with any thanks.

@mc..thanks for your comments
I don't know if you have noticed my reply with
Thanks for my questions. I do agree that I have missed
to reply for few. But I have clicked 'Like' button for those answers.
I really respect my teachers always.

So please forgive me for my mistakes and
Looking for continuos support.

My english language knowledge is very bad.
I am handling a cricket team. So I thought to
Develop my language by interacting with my boys.
I never considered your assistance as a small thing.
It is helping me to connect the words according to the situation.

No problem, achu, don't worry about it.

Sometimes I get a bit touchy. I always like to know if my answer has been helpful, is understood, and whether there are any other questions remaining.

Don't worry about your English. It is quite understandable, and will get better. Try to think of a shorter phrase which will do the same job, in your team notices.

Noted with Thanks

Alas Mac it's a compulsion

Butcha hafta give this guy credit for his determination