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achu
 
Reply Wed 5 Feb, 2014 11:15 pm
I regret to inform you that I haven't received enough response from you guys
for Sunday Game. If it's late, we cannot get the ground for Sunday.
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Reply Thu 6 Feb, 2014 03:41 am
@achu,
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I regret to inform you that I haven't received enough response from you guys
for Sunday Game. If it's late, we cannot get the ground for Sunday.


It's okay, but a little bit awkward, and maybe too long in parts. Try:

I haven't received enough responses from you all about Sunday's game.
I need feedback. We cannot get the ground for Sunday if we apply late.
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