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Sun 26 Jan, 2014 08:51 am
Hi everyone, can you tell me what do you think about grammar in my abstract.
Thanks
DO POST-YUGOSLAV COUNTRIES REQUIRE
MORE OR LESS ECONOMIC LIBERALISM ?
Socialist Federal Republic of Yugoslavia was going through gradual neo-liberal reform of economic regulations in its last decades in the eighties and nineties. At the same time rise of nationalism took place in the constituent republics leading to civil wars and disintegration. Once they became independent states they continued to change their economy policies according to idea of economic liberalism. However economy boom didn’t follow. They all have similar problems today - high unemployment rate, deindustrialization, public debt, poverty. Common interpretation of political establishment is that problems occur due to unfinished reform of public sector, state-owned enterprises and labor laws from socialism era. Hence it happens because of incomplete implementation of economic liberalism. This work will test aforementioned thesis by conducting a survey of recent history, politics and economy. Our preliminary hypothesis is reverse - these are results of implementation of economic liberalism - defined as an idea that economy ought to be based on free forces of market and private initiative - in post-Yugoslav region.
KEYWORDS: (Economic Liberalism, Post-Yugoslav countries)
@GZA,
You're missing the word
the in at least three places that I could see, including as the first word of the piece. Your verb tenses run the gamut from past to present to future. I would replace the first hyphen (they should really be em dashes) with a colon. You're also missing some commas.
@GZA,
I largely agree with Jespah. My suggestions....
Quote:THE Socialist Federal Republic of Yugoslavia was going through gradual neo-liberal reform of economic regulations in THE last decades in the eighties and nineties. At the same time, THE rise of nationalism took place in the constituent republics, leading to civil wars and disintegration. Once they became independent states, THESE REPUBLICS continued to change their economIC policies according to ideaS of economic liberalism. However THE economIC boom did NOT follow. They all have similar problems today : high unemployment rate, de-industrialization, public debt, AND poverty. A common interpretation of THE political establishment is that THESE problems occurRED due to unfinished reform of public sector, state-owned enterprises and labor laws from THE socialism era. Hence THE IDEA WAS THAT it happenED because of incomplete implementation of economic liberalism. This work will test THE aforementioned thesis by conducting a survey of recent history, politics and economy. Our preliminary hypothesis is AN ALTERNATIVE CLAIM - THAT these PROBLEMS are THE results of THE implementation of economic liberalism ( defined as an idea that economy ought to be based on free forces of market and private initiative ) in THE post-Yugoslav regionS.
KEYWORDS: (Economic Liberalism, Post-Yugoslav countries)
@GZA,
EDIT TIMED OUT
....in THE last decades OF ITS EXISTENCE, in the eighties and.....
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