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Please correct if this sentence is alright or could it be written in a better way

 
 
manni
 
Reply Tue 17 Dec, 2013 10:38 pm
1. since I had overcome similar obstacles earlier.
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roger
 
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Reply Tue 17 Dec, 2013 10:44 pm
@manni,
Where is the beginning of the sentence?
manni
 
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Reply Tue 17 Dec, 2013 10:49 pm
@roger,
Its and essay and the sentence is :
I faced many financial and cultural obstacles but I was confident of overcoming them since I had overcome such obstacles in managing my practice overseas.
(Please advise if there's a better way to write this sentence) Thanks
roger
 
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Reply Tue 17 Dec, 2013 10:54 pm
@manni,
I don't see any problems as written. You might change "such obstacles" to "similar obstacles", but that's kind of a matter of taste and what you want to convey..
manni
 
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Reply Tue 17 Dec, 2013 11:11 pm
@roger,
thank you Roger
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dalehileman
 
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Reply Wed 18 Dec, 2013 12:18 pm
@manni,
Facing many new financial and cultural obstacles I was confident of overcoming them since I had often done so managing my practice overseas
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Jack of Hearts
 
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Reply Wed 18 Dec, 2013 08:00 pm
@manni,
manni wrote:

Its and essay and the sentence is :
I faced many financial and cultural obstacles but I was confident of overcoming them since I had overcome such obstacles in managing my practice overseas.
(Please advise if there's a better way to write this sentence) Thanks

I was confident, as I overcame many such financial and cultural obstacles in managing my practice overseas.

dalehileman
 
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Reply Thu 19 Dec, 2013 12:27 pm
@Jack of Hearts,
Jack I like yours better'n mine
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