It sounds not so natural in English to me. What do you say?

I believe he is Swiss. I can be wrong, though..

Prof. Dr. Ugo Fisch

You provided an image (picture) of the text. It cannot be copied as text, edited or spell checked.

Ori, not your doing but many such links don't permit highlight-copy by the usu means

Wondering whether "operating theater" and "temporal bone lab" oughttabe cap

I would bet money the writer is not a native English speaker. I have used an OCR program on the image file that was linked to.

Dear Zengmin,
It was a great pleasure to have Dr. Yucheng Wang with us until the end of October. Dr. Wang has been very assiduous in the operating theatre of the Lucerne Hospital and in the temporal bone laboratory. He has a very bright and well prepared mind. One could see that he had a good teacher in Shanghai! He has achieved some exemplary temporal bones preparations illustrating the various surgical procedures seen during his fellowship. He has worked in two occasions a full day with me in the temporal bone lab in order to learn the techniques of drilling for the infratemporal approaches. I have admired is quick grasp of clinical situations and his excellent technical skills. I am sure Dr. Wang will be of great help in your institution because of his dedication, natural skills and great urge to achieve perfection in his clinical work. On top of this he is a very well educated, reliable and straightforward person. Congratulation for having discovered and trained such a good otologic surgeon. He has a great future in front.

Roger
Those are also what stood out to me. I don't know if oristarA wants British English or American English.

Dear Zengmin,
It was a great pleasure to have Dr. Yucheng Wang with us until the end of October. Dr. Wang has been very assiduous in the operating theatre of the Lucerne Hospital and in the temporal bone laboratory. He has a very bright and well prepared mind. One could see that he had a good teacher in Shanghai! He has achieved some exemplary temporal bones preparations illustrating the various surgical procedures seen during his fellowship. He has worked in two occasions a full day with me in the temporal bone lab in order to learn the techniques of drilling for the infratemporal approaches. I have admired is quick grasp of clinical situations and his excellent technical skills. I am sure Dr. Wang will be of great help in your institution because of his dedication, natural skills and great urge to achieve perfection in his clinical work. On top of this he is a very well educated, reliable and straightforward person. Congratulation for having discovered and trained such a good otologic surgeon. He has a great future in front.

"He has worked in two occasions a full day with me. . . ."

Awkward indeed! How about "He has worked two full days with me"?

Does the new version sound as if in only one occasion that he worked for two days in a row with "me"?

"He has a great future in front."

In front of what? Maybe "He has a great future in front of him"?

Yes, you've taken the words out of my mouth.
PS: I don't claim perfect spelling, or whatever. Just working with the original request.

I understand the meaning.The are some misspelled words."he" is used alot and maybe it can be condensed.

contrex wrote:

I would bet money the writer is not a native English speaker.

I expect Ugo Fisch is a German speaking Swiss.

Condense it PLEASE.

timur wrote:

I believe he is Swiss. I can be wrong, though..

Prof. Dr. Ugo Fisch

In the magazine of The Hong Kong College of Otorhinolaryngologists he is described as the "legendary Prof Ugo Fisch", so praise from him must be a very precious thing.

contrex wrote:

timur wrote:

I believe he is Swiss. I can be wrong, though..

Prof. Dr. Ugo Fisch

In the magazine of The Hong Kong College of Otorhinolaryngologists he is described as the "legendary Prof Ugo Fisch", so praise from him must be a very precious thing.

Can you read Swiss? Even Google Translator failed to do that.

Any English version.

oristarA wrote:

Condense it PLEASE.

No because that would be cheating. It is either your work or someone else's. If you truly want to learn, then do it yourself and post it again.