Grammar help, which is correct?

I might have written, "…in control at all times" or something to that effect

I would have omitted the first comma if not the second

No, ™, you just can't

It isd as wrong as the editing routine that changes "Tm" to "™" when little finger fails the "a" or doesn't recognize "isd" as the most common misspelling of "is"

No way

Because road safety requires a driver to be in good health and control, as the senior population increases states should push for mandatory driving tests and screenings. Since we don't know the context this might not convey the same meaning. Note however that I've removed the second comma for reasons subtle and not easily explained but which superior intellects like S. or JTT within the realm of concern might better explain

Therefore, road safety requires a driver to be in good health and control as the senior population increases. So states should push for mandatory driving tests and screenings. Tam, with this last one I'm sort of kidding because obviously road safety requires the driver to be well regardless of the senior population

One could argue tho, that it's true to the extent the senior population increases the total number of drivers

But you can see how important context. By actual count your sentence could be adjusted to convey 92 different meanings (give or take 1 or 2 depending on your religion)

Funny that something so simple can turn into something so complex, thank you for your help

Excessive complexity has always been one of my foibles

For what it's worth

Please feel free to inquire, dispute, challenge, confront, impugn

"In good health and control" is not a handy phrase.
Work out what you are trying to say, then say it more clearly.

Hello!

I am freaked out by reading:

"Please see below email."
"See below data."
"The below employees..."

in emails that I receive everyday. Are the above sentences correct? They sound so unnatural!

If it is wrong, can you help explain in simple english? I could then explain that using such is wrong.

Thanks!

I wouldn't say that it is incorrect, but it certainly is awkward, and i suspect that you are receiving such email either from people who are not native speakers of English, or native speakers of English who are poorly read and educated.

"Please see the email below."
"See the data below."
"The below named employees (or below listed employees)."

These would all be better alternatives. However, i also suspect that you will see awkward usages such as you have listed again and again.

"See above" and "see below" are quite common, and so "see email above" and "see data below" are logically (and stylistically?) acceptable, although I agree they sound a bit awkward.

Thank you both for replying. I appreciate it.