Are the grammar correct in this two sentences?

Either one works, but i would prefer number one, as number two sounds rather awkward.

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Now, "I would like to ask if the grammar are correct in this two sentences?" One would say "the grammar is correct," because grammar is a singular noun in this sentence. So you would ask: "I would like to ask if the grammar is correct . . . "

One would say ". . . these two sentences" because sentences is plural. This object, for the singular, these objects for the plural.

So, your question should read: "I would like to ask if the grammar is correct in these two sentences."

Finally, you would end that sentence with a period, and not a question mark, because the introductory clause, "I would like to ask . . . " is a statement, not a question.

In both, I would use a comma after 'warmth'. My understanding is that 'love, warmth, and 'care' are three distinct items.

The first sentence is good. The second, while grammatically correct, is badly formed and clumsy as far as usage.

I disagree Rog. Won't go in no. 2

Agree. Only needed in #1.

1. "May God always pour his love, warmth and care on you and your family. "

A comma after 'warmth' makes no difference to the meaning.

1. May God always give his apples, oranges and cherries to you and your family.

Adding a comma after 'oranges' wouldn't cause 'oranges and cherries to become a new combined type of fruit.

I think that 2 has its own kind of charm.

Why did you drop 'love' in #2, Ashley?

To the intended meaning, that is. However to me there's always that momentary misapprehension that nobody else seems to share

1. May God always give his apples, oranges and cherries to you and your family.

Adding a comma after 'oranges' wouldn't cause 'oranges and cherries to become a new combined type of fruit.

And what of the above, Dale?

The word 'grammar' is uncountable. It is seen as a mass noun, like spaghetti or rice.

Forgive the confusion of an old fella JTT but isn't it precisely the lack of a comma that seems to imply some special connection of oranges to cherries

"some special connection", not in the least, Dale.