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Vocabulary fabricate

 
 
Reply Tue 11 Jun, 2013 07:48 am
Dearest English teacher,
please teach me English by advising me about the following sentence,many thanks in advance.
My father always fabricated a lie to tell me while I was a kid.
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Setanta
 
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Reply Tue 11 Jun, 2013 07:53 am
You might change that to read: ". . . when i was a kid . . . " --otherwise, it's fine.
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Advocate
 
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Reply Tue 11 Jun, 2013 09:10 am
@Loh Jane,
I think the following would read better.

"My father always lied to me when I was a kid."
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contrex
 
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Reply Tue 11 Jun, 2013 10:56 am
@Loh Jane,
Loh Jane wrote:

My father always fabricated a lie to tell me while I was a kid.


Always applies to a period of time... but he say he fabricated a lie. One lie? The same lie? Over and over again?
Loh Jane
 
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Reply Wed 12 Jun, 2013 07:18 am
@contrex,
Hi contrex,
over and over.
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Loh Jane
 
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Reply Wed 12 Jun, 2013 07:19 am
@contrex,
a different lie.
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Loh Jane
 
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Reply Wed 12 Jun, 2013 07:24 am
Hi all,
why can't I say 'while I was a kid'?
Setanta
 
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Reply Wed 12 Jun, 2013 07:38 am
You can say it, no one said you can't. "When i was a kid" is just more likely to be what a native speaker would say.
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Loh Jane
 
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Reply Wed 12 Jun, 2013 07:57 am
@contrex,
Hi contrex,
I am still a little girl.
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JTT
 
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Reply Wed 12 Jun, 2013 10:06 pm
@Loh Jane,
Quote:
why can't I say 'while I was a kid'?


I'd say that you "can't" say it, Jane, because it's not the natural choice for a native speaker, which I gather, is what you would like to be.

It's one of those odd choices that seems very natural for many situations but for some odd reason, in certain circumstances, it's just not used.

Michael Swan in Practical English Usage, page 74, explains it this way;

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2 Simultaneous long actions while;as

We prefer when to refer to ages and periods of life.

When I was a child we lived in London. (NOT As/While I was a child ...)

His parents died when he was twelve. (NOT ... while he was twelve.


[Do you have access to this book? It's excellent for sorting out these small nuances.]
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