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Wed 8 May, 2013 04:31 am
How do I go about punctuating the following sentences?
If I am to go with you, then one I want some money, and two I need you not to talk.
My concerns are directed at the punctuation about "one" and "two."
If I am to go with you, then, one, I want some money and, two, I need you not to talk.
@bobobinks,
Bob I'd instead use numeral, eg, "then 1) I….and 2) I…"
Or maybe "then first"…, "and second"...