Does the writing sound natural? Any edit required?

It might help, Ori, if you could explain the circumstances

Can you see the pics?

Discussion backgroud:
(Poor kids in their primary schools)










What Chinese government has forgotten is:

Mao's Great Leap Forward 'killed 45 million in four years'
http://www.independent.co.uk/arts-entertainment/books/news/maos-great-leap-forward-killed-45-million-in-four-years-2081630.html

Yes thanks Ori they came through beautifully

But you haven't answered my question: Does the writing sound natural? Is there any edit required? (about the OP)

Well Ori I was afraid you might ask

I'm not sure since I don't understand the significance of the kids

Doubtless it will all be obvious to the profoundly intelligent and well-educated participant

….leaving me out. But let's see how many others respond

EG: I see no flag in the photos, I cannot read the Chinese, and I am wondering whether I'm to assume the children are shouting

……though in one I do see a young fella with eyes closed and mouth open

As for the flag,

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Flag_of_China

….a discussion somewhat involved; though its significance regarding the children will doubtless be clear to the student of Chinese history which, forgive me, I'm not

My first reaction, "What about the OP"

until I realized you probably meant "of the OP", but "If that's the case," I wondered, "what else might I assume requires editing"

Just pulling your leg Ori, actually I love you