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hello everybody! this is my essay I hope you can help me to correct the mistakes

how many times have you students asked"When are we going to use this in real life?".Let me show you where and how you use it and why I like it.

Where and how you use Mathematics in your daily life?.You use it, when you buy a bag or a book at the stores, pay a restaurant bill or tip and decorate your home. Whether you are building a house in Jeddah or whatever, you are using Mathematics to get things done. Sometimes, you find people use it by many ways, such as, their fingers or brains.

Some people have asked me why I like Mathematics?, I will explain you why I like it by a question that, why you don't like it. Mathematics has helped us to figure out a lot of things such as, the existence of God and measure spaces.

Finally, I hope you understood the ways we use Mathematics, the benefits for it and why I like it. In my opinion, Mathematics is one of the most important things in our life.




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