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Reply Wed 10 Apr, 2013 10:24 pm
Hi, can someone check my paragraph below?

One of my favorite fantasy books is Fate Edge by Ilona Andrews. This book is filled with fictional people who seem real. When I'm reading this book, I can almost hear the characters, and I love the children's voices. If I had to pick a favorite character, I would have to go with Audrey because she is funny, talented and clever.

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hingehead
 
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Reply Wed 10 Apr, 2013 10:38 pm
@learning100,
Reads well to me.
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MontereyJack
 
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Reply Thu 11 Apr, 2013 12:20 am
ditto
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learning100
 
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Reply Thu 11 Apr, 2013 12:42 pm
Thank you!
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dalehileman
 
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Reply Thu 11 Apr, 2013 02:35 pm
@learning100,
It's perfectly okay 100. But I love a challenge

One of my favorite fantasies is Fate Edge by Ilona Andrews, occupied by fictional people who (nonetheless) seem real. (As read,) I can almost hear each character, and (especially) I love those children's voices. If I had to pick a favorite (kid?), it's Audrey--funny, talented and clever.
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