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Part 4 Could you please proofread these sentences? I'm learning English

 
 
Reply Mon 11 Feb, 2013 01:51 pm
This is the fourth part of my post.

Hello, everybody!

Could someone please proofread my vocabulary flashcards? It shouldn't take too much time for a native English speaker, and I can't proofread the sentences myself. Sad

Please suggest better alternatives for the sentences that don't seem right. I really need to learn this vocabulary for university.

Thank you!

Here are the sentences:

SPARKLE (v.i. & n.) Brightish light. The light moves on a stationary or semi-stationary object (cf. SCINTILLATE).

The sparkle of sunlight on water.

The sparkle of a diamond.

~ COMPARE:

The diamond glinted as the light passed over it.

The box was opened to reveal a mass of sparkling diamonds.

~ IDIOMATIC

Her eyes sparkled with fun/humor/malice (of teasing nature).


SCINTILLATE (v.i.) Particularly used for the sparkling effect of sequins. The light is stationary, the object is moving.

The bareback rider's costume scintillated as she rode round the
arena.

The metal mobiles scintillated as they slowly turned round the
light.

SHINE (v.i., v.t. & n.) Generic term for strong constant light.

a) The sun shines.

The torch shone through the darkness: he shone the torch in her face.

b) A knight in shining armor.

The crockery was shining clean.

Her golden hair shone in the sun (cf. GLINT).

> NOTE: As noun only used with definite article, as in the shine of silver.

~ IDIOMATIC:

His face shone with pleasure. Strong emotion of pleasure, exaltation, distress.

Her eyes were shining with excitement.

Her eyes were shining with tears.
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Reply Tue 12 Feb, 2013 03:21 pm
@EnglishPractice88,
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….she rode round the arena.
http://onelook.com/?w=alliteration&ls=a

Also it's " 'round"

Her eyes sparkled with teasing fun/humor, even malice

Quote:
metal mobiles scintillated
Twice tongue twister

Quote:
The torch shone through the darkness:
Alliteration; otherwise okay

Quote:
he shone the torch in her face.
Prac, not so sure about this. In the first place it doesn't logically connect with the preceding phrase. But second, notwithstanding alliteration it somehow grossly, grindingly grates. Let's hear from somebody who understands these technicalities better than I. But

Her face shone in the darkness as he brought near the torch

Quote:
The crockery was shining clean.
I would have said "shiny" (don't ask me why)

Quote:
~ IDIOMATIC:
His face shone with pleasure.
Fails on all counts but mainly not idiomatic. We'd say His face lit up, shined, beamed

Quote:
Strong emotion of pleasure, exaltation, distress.
Not sure Prac what we're supposed to do with this one

…...but otherwise hope I was of some help. Doubtless we'll get some static, with the slightest misstep or oversight of any sort hereabout they'll tear you limb from limb

No, yes, fellas, I know, it s/b a semi

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