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Part 3 Could you please proofread these sentences? I'm learning English

 
 
Reply Mon 11 Feb, 2013 01:50 pm
Hello, everybody!

Could someone please proofread my vocabulary flashcards? It shouldn't take too much time for a native English speaker, and I can't proofread the sentences myself. Sad

Please suggest better alternatives for the sentences that don't seem right. I really need to learn this vocabulary for university.

Thank you!

Here are the sentences:

The bombers dropped flares to light up the target.

The shipwrecked men watched the plane fly over their dinghy and
fired off flares to attract attention.

The fire flared up when I threw petrol on it.

BLAZE (v.i. & n.) Intense light, often associated with heat. Whereas FLARE is brief, BLAZE is of some duration.

The firemen could not put out the blaze in the rubber factory.

During the Carnival, New Orleans is a blaze of light.

All the lights were blazing in the house.

~ IDIOMATIC:

His eyes/face blazed with anger (often righteous indignation or
excessive patriotic loyalty).

B. REFLECTED LIGHT


GLITTER (v.i. & n.) A hard metallic light, with unpleasant connotations. Thus a knife used by a murderer might "glitter", while in a fair fight swords would "flash ".

All that glitters is not gold.

The eyes of the snake glittered as it drew back its head to strike.

The gun glittered in his hand as he slowly leveled it at his victim.

~ IDIOMATIC:

His eyes glittered with hatred (controlled or open)/with greed
with envy/with desire (sexual, of unscrupulous nature).

GLISTEN (v.i. & n.) A shiny reflection associated with moisture.

The streets glisten after rain.

A woman's face glistens with cold-cream.

Eyes glisten with tears.

NOTE: Her eyes glistened with tears (not pejorative).

His eyes glistened with tears (self-pity, effeminate).

His/her eyes GLITTERED with tears (would express anger, hatred:
the tears may be there, but the face is hard).

GLINT (v.i. & n.) Hard, momentary light, usually metal or glass.

There was a glint of steel as he snatched the knife from his pocket.

The piece of broken bottle glinted in the grass.

The light glinted on his spectacles as he turned.
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