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Part 2Could you please proofread these sentences? I'm learning English

 
 
Reply Mon 11 Feb, 2013 01:49 pm
Hello, everybody!

Could someone please proofread my vocabulary flashcards? It shouldn't take too much time for a native English speaker, and I can't proofread the sentences myself. Sad

Please suggest better alternatives for the sentences that don't seem right. I really need to learn this vocabulary for university.

Thank you!

Here are the sentences:
TWINKLE (v.i. & n.) Original light which obtains intermittent effect through reflection or filtering.


The stars twinkle in the sky. (The atmosphere acts as a veil.)

The lights twinkle on the Christmas tree. (The tinsel and silver
paper move and reflect the light.)

~ IDIOMATIC:

His eyes twinkled with amusement (often of an ironic or sardonic
kind).

GLIMMER (v.i. & n.) Like TWINKLE a filtered light. but the "veil" dims and obscures the light. Usually associated with a feeble light, or a light seen fitfully at a distance.

The lights of the house glimmered through the fog.

The glimmering tail-light disappeared round a final bend
(cf. GLEAM - which is clearer and unmoving),

~ IDIOMATIC:

His eyes glimmered with understanding (indicates effort by a mentally very dense mind). FLICKER, with understanding, implies
a temporary realization - either the person is very dull and cannot grasp the matter, or he is ill, in a state of shock, etc. which precludes him from sustained effort of concentration.

His eyes glimmered at me from behind bi-focal spectacles
(refers to very myopic person - no other figurative connotation).

FLARE (v.i. & n.) A sudden and brief, but intense increase in light associated with the burning of a highly combustible object.

Old-time photographers worked with magnesium - when they lit it
there was a flare of white light which allowed them to take the
photograph.

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Reply Mon 11 Feb, 2013 02:47 pm
Actually, I'm not seeing errors here. You're right that these words have some rather subtle shades of meaning. That's one of the things with English, we are loaded with words that are often used as synonyms, but the truth is, there are very few true synonyms where two words are absolutely identical in meaning.
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